Smitty (smittywing) wrote,
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[Gateverse Remix] Socially Acceptable Behavior (The White Men Can't Rap Remix)

HA! Now that LJ will FINALLY let me post!

eleveninches, I am very very very very sorry for being so very very very very late with this.

Seriously, to remix one of eleveninches's stories, I basically had 3 choices: Play it straight (boring!), hit up the angst (not my thing, so much), or find a way to truly salute the cracktasticness of Them Other Boys Don't Know How to Act. I chose the latter.

Title: Socially Acceptable Behavior (The White Men Can't Rap Remix)
Author: Smitty
Rating: Oh, it's NC-17.
Original Story: Them Other Boys Don't Know How to Act by eleveninches. It was an honor and a pleasure and once again...I'm sorry. Possibly for more than being late.
Notes: Many thanks for wychwood for the fantastic check on my rhythm and syllables, wojelah for getting me through the end when my brain failed, and reccea and raisintorte for listening to me whine and carry on.

Ladies and Germs, I proudly present, in complete limerick form:

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Seriously, this is quite possibly the best thing ever! I bow down to your mad rhyming skills. You so win at life! *g*
THAT IS AWESOME! *gives cookies*

*stares in awe at the amount of time this must have taken*
That's just brilliant, the very model of a remix!
I've died. Died and gone to a place where I actually enjoy reading limericks that aren't just "There once was a man from Nantucket..."

So he gave John his fucking French fries. That's the best closing line, ever, I swear. This is so great, I can't even describe how I feel about it.

*love*
omigod GIGGLES!
oh, i love you.
I humbly bow and repeat a kowtow
In stark admiration and glee.
The original fanfic I read through and laughed sick
But this gem of quick rhyme
Is so Phat and sublime
I'm quite tempted to shout: "Marry me!"
HOW DID I MISS THIS BEFORE?!

This is sheer genius, and god I can't even imagine how much work it had to have been! Win, win, win.

Anonymous

June 20 2008, 22:35:43 UTC 11 years ago

"Lucius's lushly curved rear"
I shrieked. I actually shrieked with laughter at that. XD And most of the rest, too, but that stood out as absolute genius. *applauds*
this is without a doubt the most original and brilliant remix I have EVER had the pleasure to read! bravo!
OH WOW!
That's great!
I can't stop laughing!
Brilliant!
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